Yesterday we talked about similes and how to identify them in an author's writing. Today you are going to become the author and create your own similes. You are to create five similes. Each one should be based on one of your five senses; touch , taste, smell, hearing and sight. Be creative, but make sure you use like or as and make a comparison.
Example:
The fabric was as smooth as silk. (touch)
His snore is like the loudest lion roar. (hearing)
The room had an inviting smell like fresh cut roses. (smell)
He was as tall as the trees. (sight)
The tea had a sweet taste like fresh honey. (taste)
Darius M.
ReplyDelete"Why,you are as cold as clay," she said.
ALEXIS.B .
ReplyDeleteMR. ICHABOD CRANE WAS AS SKINNY AS A SCARECROW. BY NATALIE STANDFORD
Darius and Alexis you put these under today's assignment instead of yesterday.
ReplyDeleteTHE KITTEN WAS SOFT like yarn
ReplyDeleteTHE SMELL OF GINGER AL IS AS SPICY AS HOT SAUCE IN YOUR CHILI.
ReplyDeletethe touch af sandpaper is as rough as dager blades
ReplyDelete1.The dog's fur felt like leather.(touch)
ReplyDelete2.The cake's icing was like peanut butter.(taste)
3.My nana's perfume smells like cotton candy.(smell)
4.My voice is like an Angel's.(hear)
5.Makenzie is as tall as my eight year old cousin.(see)
1 Simile:Hot water feels like fire. 2 Simile:Rc taste like coke. 3 Simile:Onions smells like peper. 4 Simile:The birds sometimes look like a eagle. 5 Simile:Police cars sounds like a fire truck.
ReplyDelete1.The eye of the oven is like the burning heat of the Sun.(touch)
ReplyDelete2.The chemicals in the Science Lab smelled like burning rubber.(smell)
3.The cheese cake was as sweet as sugar .(taste)
4. When my baby sister screams it sounds like a murder scene ,then our neighbors come banging on the door .(hear)
5. The size of Christons wound was like a golf ball . (see)
he looked as meen as a rabid gog (see)
ReplyDeletehis hand as cold as ice (feal)
it tasted like a tire that has ben roling in the mud (tast)
that sounds like a singing train (hear)
pankakes smell like a fryday morning
These are very good if you make them into complete sentences.
Delete1.The sun is as shiney as gold.(see) 2.The brick was as hard as cement.(thoch) 3.The Beans were as tasty as mac-n-cheese.(taste) 4.The trumpet was as load as an elephant.(hear)
ReplyDelete5.The shoe was as stinkey as a stinkbug.(smell)
1.Her skinis as scaly as snake skin(touch)
ReplyDelete2.Candy taste as sweet as honey(taste)
3.Pickles smell like a baby's diper(smell)
4.When she sings it sounds like a baby is crying(hear)
5.Her clothes make her look like Beyonce(see)
1.THE boy's skin was soft as a t-shirt.(Touch)
ReplyDelete2.Turkey smell's like ham.(smell)
3.The was bright like the sun.(see)
4.CHITLINS taste like pigfeet.(taste)
5.AN wolf howl like a owl.(hear)
1.The honey is as sweet as me.(taste)
ReplyDelete2.The snow was as tall as the porch.(sight)
3.Someone's feet smells like a roten egg.(smell)
4.Gage's singing was as loud as the thunder.(hearing)
5.My uncle was as soft as a blanket.(touch)
1.Mac's shoulder was as cold as a freezer.2.My taste buds were so tasty,they was going to shoot up like a rocket.3.The smell was so tasy it felt like candyland.4.I heard something so loud it sounded like a roaring lion.5.I see so much it looks like I see the Himalayan Mountains.
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on making your sentences clearer. They are a little difficult to understand.
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ReplyDelete1.THE KITTEN WAS SOFT LIKE YARN (TOUCH)
2.MY MOM COOKED PANCAKES AND I FELT LIKE I WAS IN HEAVEN(TASTE)
3.SHE WAS AS CUTE AS A BUTTON(SEE)
4.I ILKED WHEN ME AND MY FRIEND ALEXIS HAD SO MUCH FUN IT WAS FUNER THAN RIDING A BIKE(SEE)
5.I LIKE WHEN I GET TO SPEND THE NIGHT AT MY FRIENDS AND HAVE FUN
1.The boy's skin was soft as a t-shirt.
ReplyDelete2.Turkey smell like ham.
3.The light was bright like the sun.
4.Chitlin's taste like pig feet
5.An wolf howl like a owl.
Takarian Goodman She,s sweet as a lollipop.The fruitcake smelled like strawberries. She has a beautiful voice like an angel. She was hot as lava.She sounded like a sad song
ReplyDelete1.the chicken tasted like a bag of pork skins
ReplyDelete2.the cat was as quiet as a mouse
3.seth saw a little dog
4.i felt an air breeze outside
5.i hear good like owls
3, 4 and 5 are not similes.
Deletethe force pulled at cloe's and t-bone's fur like a vacuum cleaner.
ReplyDeleteWrite your own, not one from a book you are reading.
Delete1.The gown was as soft as a kitten's fur.
ReplyDelete2.Clarice's eyes were as dark as night.
3.The garbage can smelled as fowl as the sewers.
4.The waffles were as crisp as apples.
5.He was as loud as a donkey with a tick on it's leg.
1. The prize felt like metle. 2. The zibra look like it was a babby. 3. It smelled as good as pizza. .4It tastes like pie. 5. It sounds like a long long fast song.
ReplyDelete1. She was as cold as ice.
ReplyDelete2. The candy was as sweet as the sweetest fruit.
3. She sounded like a sweet melody.
4. She was as beautiful as an Angel.
5. The oatmeal smelled like cinnamon.
Good work.
DeleteHe was as loud as a lion. It tasted as good as apple pie. His shoes were as soft as a blankent. It smell as good as chiken on a stick
ReplyDeleteyou misst one
DeleteHe looked as big as a giant.
DeleteHe was as loud as a lion. It tasted as good as apple pie. His shoe felt as soft as a blanket. It was as good as pizza.
I am the only one who replies to posts Mr. Cleveland.
DeleteThe cat sounded like a dog barking.(sound)I smell like apple.(smell) I see the dog that looked like a cat running.(see) that tasted like apples.(taste) that felt like a snowball.(touch)
ReplyDeleteThe tree bark was as hard as rock
ReplyDeleteThe pie tasted like a cinnomen glazed donut
The candles smell like rasberry apples
The wind sound like a wolf howling in the distance
The broken tree bark looked like a foot print in the snow
Good job.
Delete1. It sound like I just heared a sound coming from the room.
ReplyDelete2.This pumpkin taste like rabbit.
3.It smells like somebody is sweaty.
4.Itfelt like I just touched fungi.
5.Itlook like he is upside down.
Only one of these is a simile. Just because you use "like" or "as" does not make it a simile. You have to make a comparison between to things.
Delete1.As soon as she saw the clown, she was so scared, it was like a boy having the scariest nightmare of his life. 2.When the man turned on the motorcycle, it sounded like a thousand balloons poping at your ear. 3.The dog's fur was as soft as a cloud. 4.My mother's homemade peanut-butter cookies tasted as if she used the greatest ingredients you could.
ReplyDelete5.My dog smelled like a pig in a mud pile.
The dog's tounge feel like a wet slimy frog.
ReplyDelete1.IT smells like a dog with no bath(smell)
ReplyDelete2.LIKE a fish with no fin(see)
3.like a leaf with no holes(touch)
4.AS a hamburger with no cheese(taste)
5.like a dog with a crazy bark(sound)
Write complete sentences. Don't use the word "it" as your subject.
Delete1.smelt like eggs 2.taste like anapple 3.feltlike an apple 4.snow looks ice cream 5.that sounded like thunder
ReplyDeleteYou didn't include what you are comparing these too. Write in complete sentences.
Deletethe pie taste sweet like ahot cinimin roll. my feet smell like raw chicken. Daeyon band sound like a singing whale. She look like a brown rat
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