Monday, February 11, 2013

Everyone is doing better at identifying and writing similes.  However, some people are still making comparisons that do not make sense.  You cannot compare a person to a pin. Your comparisons have to give the reader a clearer picture of what you are trying to say, not confuse them.  Also, you know what is appropriate and inappropriate content for school.  I had to delete some people's post and you should be able to figure out why.

Today's task is to complete the following similes.

1. She is as pretty as
2. He is as tall as
3. The piano sounds like
4. The dog barks like
5. The air feels like

2 comments:

  1. 1.She is as pretty as a fashion designer.
    2.He is as tall as a "10" wrestler.
    3.The piano sounds like a organ.
    4.The dog barks like a wolf.
    5.The air feels like a fresh winter breeze.

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  2. The wind feels like ice daggers.
    He is as tall as a clown.
    The harp sounds like the tuba.
    The dogs bark sounds like a lions roar.
    She is as pretty as a model.

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